Home?
Ask me not
It hurts me so often
It’s not either a place or space
Where I sleep
Not at all a street or school
Where I walk
It’s there
Where my heart hovers and hovers
Until its get hurt
It’s there
Where I sleep so sound
As if I have no tomorrow
It’s there
Where I walk and talk
As if I own every piece of land
It’s there
Only there in my dream
And I dream so often
By Sonsnow
Aramaic Philosophy God created the Heavens…..the First Wheel God created Me in his image…..the Second Wheel God created the Earth….the Third Wheel
Just a thought keep your feet planted on Earth and reach for the stars. Great poem.
Thank you, a home is what you dears to dream and dare to dream.
10-4 Carry on like your words great work.
Beautiful. It put me in mind of “Inception”, where the group of people gather to dream.
– “They come here to dream?”
– “No, they come here to wake up. For them, the dream has become reality.”
Thank You!
Thank YOU!
Love your poem, my friend. Sending you good wishes from miles away and wings to fly your heart and mind to a happy, peaceful place. 💜💜
Good to hear from you my friend, wishing you the same, may you live happy and healthy.
A home is usually a safe place to shelter ourselves in our personal space and dream of better days to come.
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Home is where the heart is.
True, home is where the heart hovers and hovers. Home is where the heart goes when you goes to sleep.
Hi Sonam, thanks for following my blog. I enjoy your poetry very much and hope you find your home, wherever that may be, and with it, all the happiness, peace and prosperity that you seek. Very warm regards.
Thank you so much for your wishes and it means a lot to me.
Beautifully written! Home in the dreams… love it. Best of luck to you
Thank you so much!
Well said. It cannot be merely a physical structure.
Thank You sir.
I like Home a lot and look forward to reading more. Thanks also for following me!
Thanks a lot Sir,
Beautiful, deep and heartbreaking words, all at the same time. You have bared your soul and your heart. I hear it. I feel the ache of longing.
“Where I walk and talk
As if I own every piece of land
It’s there
Only there in my dream
And I dream so often”.
These words stood out to me. It reminded me of part of Psalm 115, “The highest heavens belong to the Lord, but the earth belongs to mankind.” When I read the Psalm I learn that for those who fear the Lord God, are called his children. Children have an inheritance from their Father. All we have to do is believe he “is” and that he is the rewarder of those who seek him. (Hebrews 11) What he owns we walk on as if we were at home, because we are family, family of the Most High God. I love that you dare to dream. God put that in your heart Sonam. I see a heart that seeks justice in you.
Thank you so much! May the blessings of god be there to guide me towards my homeland. Thank you for putting your thoughts and wishes.
Beautiful poem!
Many thanks for stopping by my Travel and Photography blog.
Thank You! I will surely enjoy the world captured by your words and lens.
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Beautifully expressed
Thank You!
Took me a moment but finally caught your refrain, ending beautifully with —
It’s there
Only there in my dream
And I dream so often
Nice, Sonam 🙂
Ps – followed u on Twitter 🙂
Thank you so much!
Beautiful. There can’t be a better home than nature for all of us who have come from there. This mortal frame is a licence to ambulation from otherwise static existence. Congrats
Thank You, Sir,
After all we are all pilgrims and refugees on this earth.
Thank you for reminding of the benefits of home as I travel now on our long road trip. I hope you enjoy following my blog. USFMAN
Thank you, I love reading traveler’s blog and that’s my way of traveling to different places. Travelers are cultural embassadors of the world. So, thank you for being one of them.
Hi Sonam,
It was really nice to read your poem. For a moment I just went numb and totally speechless. A thought well put in simple words. Lovely.
Thank You.
The words and the image work so well together, as if one was born of the other. A beautiful poem, and a beautiful picture. Is the photo yours? I’m guessing Tibet with that landscape and fluttering prayer-flags
Thank You, this picture is not mine but it resembles the home I am dreaming for so long. Most probably it’s somewhere in Tibet.
A beautiful place to call home. Serene, despite the wind.
Congratulations, Sonam Tsering!
I have nominated your blog for the Real Neat Blog Award.
More about this nomination is at
https://dearkitty1.wordpress.com/2019/06/10/real-neat-blog-award-congratulations-fifteen-nominees/
The Post shows the incredible power of story telling, as each part is completed with a memorable story. Thank you for that.
Thanks for the encouraging note
A beautiful piece about how important a home is whether a dwelling in or outside our minds. Thank you for following BrewNSpew.
Thank You Ma’am.
Beautiful Sonam, your words are hauntingly beautiful.
Thank You so much!
Beautiful writing Sonam Tsering
Thank You!
I admire your courage, and my heart goes out to you for what you and your homeland have suffered.
This is a beautiful post, and I can feel the longing. A very beautiful photo as well!
May God bless you and keep you safe, and that you find the home you long for. And that we are all moved to understand what your homeland is going through.
Thank you for visiting my site. You are in my prayers.
Vanessa
Thank You so much for your prayers and encouraging words. May the peace prevail on earth.
You are welcome!
And yes!
A wonderful poem!!keep moving🤩👍
Thank You!
Hi Sonam – your writing is beautiful. Is there an email id that I can contact you at?
Thank You for your kind word. Please reach out to me on this Gmail ID:tsesonsnow@gmail.com
So many of your poems and comments on home remind me of my own wandering – and also of the words of Robert Frost, who wrote, “Home is the place where, when you have to go there, / They have to take you in.”
I hope you are not only taken in; but welcomed! I hope you not only, one day, make yourself at home; but also feel at home. I wish and dream of peace for you and those around you. M
Thank you for sharing the beautiful word of wisdom from Robert Frost, and I thank you for your beauiful wish.
Thank You
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Hi Sonam
Thanks for the/another follow(s) and/or the ‘likes’
IF you want to go on a journey (destination unknown), you can follow me. Thanks and enjoy the trip.
happy travelling
“early bird (very) Sleepy-head” craig (here in “Sleepy Hollow”)
“I travel not to go anywhere, but to go. I travel for travel’s sake. The great affair is to move.”
– Robert Louis Stevenson
http://www.craigsquotes.wordpress.com + my third book ‘Here, There and Everywhere’
“Do not go where the path may lead. Go where there is no path and leave a trail”
-Emerson
of CHAOS?? (at least in the “real world” and hopefully NOT cyberspace too)
“Mr going nowhere (fast) man”
PPS
Don’t worry about the world ending today…its already tomorrow in scenic and tranquil ‘little’ New Zealand
https://resources.stuff.co.nz/content/dam/images/4/y/r/n/6/a/image.related.StuffLandscapeSixteenByNine.1420×800.228ba8.png/content/dam/images/4/y/r/n/6/a/image.related.StuffLandscapeSixteenByNine.1420×800.228ba8.png/1616873002911.jpg
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As the Covid Cases continue to rise in my Homeland, I miss it more today.
Wow, such a beautiful piece 🙂
Thank You Ananya for stopping by.